Recount writing

Last week For writing I wrote a Recount about my holiday. we were told to write a recount about our holiday but put in elaboration to our writing. First before we started writing we had to plan our writing. I wrote my story about Xbox and need for speed (bad idea) because i had to elaborate on so many things but I finished elaborating on what a Lamborghini is and what happens in a drag race.

(please beware some of my story might not make sense but please comment and give feedback so I can fix my writing :)

BROOM BROOM is all I heard from the Tv as I drove really fast on a Saturday. During the Holidays me, Logan and Sam Played Need for speed for fun, to race each other and catch up with each other.

On Saturday I logged onto my Xbox one. As soon as I logged in Sam T invited me to a party. After that he invited Logan N to the party, once we were all in the party we all went on need for speed. As soon as we got on  Logan and Sam joined my game and then we drove to a drag race to grind money. To grind money you repetitively do a race. What seemed like FOUR hours was actually finally over because once we finished grinding Logan had 176,000$ in game and I had 160,000$ so Logan bought a Lamborghini huracan. his car is a dark grape purple that looked really nice. I bought a Lamborghini murcielago. My car is yellow with an Enjuku racing sticker on the top of the window with a sticker that says “BYE!” on the back because it's fast. The only things I got on my Lamborghini was a spoiler and the rims.

Once I was finished personalizing my car I left the garage and then we looked at each others cars. Logan had gone with a dark purple, my car was yellow/orange and Sam's car was black. Then we had to grind some more money to max upgrade our cars so once I had maxed my car out it had 1,100HP (horse power) And a top speed of 225 Miles per hour. Then I decided to vs Sam in a drag race.

In the drag race the game makes you do a burnout with a tyre heat meter to show how much your tyres are heated. Once the time has finished counting down the game tells you to keep perfect rpm but if you don't your tyres will spin a lot on the launch.

The car has A pointy nose with vent holes carved into the front. The rear of the car has a carbon strip in between the lights and the lower part of the car is black with more vents for cooling the engine

I thought that my car was going to be faster but I was wrong because his lamborghini aventador beat me in the drag race but I knew I was faster and more skilled than Logan. After that I built a MONSTROUS toyota supra with 1000HP. The car is faster than the lamborghini murcilago (murcielago) which is crazy because A lamborghini is a sleek, fast power house and the supra… is just a generic car but it's the engine that stands out. Once I was finished maxing the car out the final hp rating was 1097hp. Then I added the final touch… the paint I put on a bounch (Bunch) of different languages words that mean good bye because the car was going to be fast. then I started to play forza horizon 3. Forza horizon 3 is a game for car guys.

Once the game finished loading I realized that a youtuber with 600 subscribers was online so I asked him to invite me to his game and then I joined, He and a bunch of

other people were playing around at the airport/dragstrip Because he doesn't do drifting or circuit racing so I had to build a drag car to compete with all the other people but I couldn't keep up because i don't tune drag cars I tune drift cars. After that I went onto online adventure. Online adventure is a series of four races. The goal in the four races is to get the most experience points to win the championship and get an amount of cash. When I joined the game makes you choose a car depending on the class that everyone has voted on. Once I got in I saw that everyone had voted D class which is the class for SLOW cars but… I thought I had a plan but my plan failed because I thought that taking a 400hp 1940 woody wagon with stock tires and three gears would have an unfair advantage but I had the disadvantage.