Star Explosion Writing

STAR EXPLOSION


For the last few weeks we have been doing learning how to write paragraphs in our writing and making them more descriptive.

Star Explosion

When a star is going to explode it means it's the end of the star's life. Then it begins its process of the explosion. It happens in four parts.

At first it doesn't look like a explosion but inside is a boiling fuse ready to explode. It swaps color between yellow,orange and red that means that it’s ready to explode. I think that it does this so that more stars can fit in and shine bright. This makes me wonder. what aliens think they are?

Then  the red starts to fade away and then the orange gets darker. then the flame starts to bubble outside of the circle. that means that inside the star it is expanding and trying to push out. And then all of a sudden yellow blobs of fire emerge from the star. This makes me wonder,What does a star explosion look like from earth?

The yellow spots turn into a blue flame. Wow!!! a big flash just like a camera.This  means it's blowing up. When the flash goes away the star is now and blue that is the hottest flame. this makes me wonder how long do stars live?

Now the star is blue that means it is very hot!. and then all of a sudden the blue star starts to expand and get bigger. it has 3 colors they are,a dark blue,a neon blue and a whitish color. The star is as bright as the night sky. This makes me wonder how hot is it?.

name

we have written our names and made them bigger.Its called enlargement

be there

we are learning about the value be there. ant that means that to be there in the moment and stay focus

acrostic poem

Crocodiles

Really long

Only 23 different kinds

Can be as long as 7 meters

Only live in the wild+aquarium

Deadly

In the wild

Larger crocs eat birds

In Assie

Attack prey from water

NOT FRIENDLY

                   

frog animation

digatal dig

day of a green turtle

Day of a green turtle

When I woke up I saw a bunch of people as usual as I live on a beach.When I start to walk around and some adults came to me and they were all like WOW look at that green turtle so I showed of my sweet moves!.After That I got bored so I wandered off somewhere down the beach I saw a fellow green turtle and it was my friend Logan and I shouted out HEY!!! Logan wanna chomp on some seaweed and he said yes.So we swam out to sea and dived under water and we found seaweed so we ate it untill a  shark came so we swam as fast as we could and we eventuly out landed him by going on land.By the time we came up it was night time so I said goodbye and I found my tribe and slept

The end

chocolate writing

We are learning to

put passion into our writing and make it more exciting to read.

Attempt 1:WOW im so exited to eat the brown cube.my taste budes are watering with exitment I stare at the brown cube.I pick it and I cant resist but to just take a bite.I feel the creamy explostion in my mouth it ambushes my taste buds,It explodes my mouth with brown goodness!!!!

Attempt 2:oh my word i'm so excited to eat the brown topless pyramid!.it called out to me.Josiah eat me eat me!!!.I bugged my arm but I stopped myself so I Just took a sniff but my mouth just couldn't resist so pretended to drop it in my mouth.

Attempt 3: There is a brown creamy box in front of me.I think to myself Eat it EAT IT.no!! I replied My mind is going afk.I start to sweat intensely WHAT DO I DO!.  it starts to melt now I really don't know what to do.I can't hold myself anymore I just had to take a bite. when I do I feel a cweamy thick flow going thru my mouth

Attempt 4: There is a brown soupy box in front of me.I think to myself What do I it ti it looks lo.My mind is going afk.I start to sweat intensely WHAT DO I DO!.  it starts to melt now I really don't know what to do.I can't hold myself anymore I just had to take a bite.When I did I felt an explosion of creamy sensation.

Attempt 5: Oh my god this brown sensational piece of art is right in front of me. It looks pretty tasty I wonder If I could get away with biting it. But my rumbling tummy said WAIT!!!. I got furious at my tummy because I really wanted to bite the piece of artwork as it looked so delicious and tasty. A sweet smell invaded nostrils. I knew I just had to take a bite. When I did It was as though my taste buds had been ambushed by the creaminess on my gums as it slushed around in my mouth.

school trips are awesome!!

On Friday the Senior Syndicate went to Spencer park. When we got on the bus. I was very excited because I like bus rides. On the bus I sat next to Robbie. on the way there and whenever the indicator beeping noise went off Robbie would freak out because he thought that the bus was going to explode. When we arrived at Spencer park we lined up outside and walked over to a tree and then we sat under the tree. next we got a photo taken with all of my mates.

After that we had morning tea. I ate some rice crackers and skulled a juice for fun. wHen we were allowed to go play I explored around to see all of the playable on things. then I saw the sand I Knew I had to play there because there was a water pump. me,Jed and Jayden made a bridge out of driftwood. we supported it with sand. Then it was time to go to the beach.we hiked through the woods to a nearby lifeguard station. we took a little break. then we continued on and then we were given the option to take off our shoes because the sand could get in our shoes. when we got on the beach we all sat down and the teachers told us that we're having a competion. we had to dig down. The people in my team are Josh,Sam t,Andre and Jayden b.Ms miginitey would jump into the holes and seewitch wone was depper and my team won!!. then we got our photo taken.next we

walked down to a different part of the beach and had a nother competion. we had to make our every day super heroes.This is the one we made.

my cat.

 General statement.

I think that a cat is a nice friend to have around.

Description

What does it look like?

White paws and black body with White patches.

Where is it found? In my lounge.

How does it behave?

naughty

Evaluation

They are very cute

goodbye summer hello autumn:-(

Goodbye infinite water gun fights, hello snug and cozy fires.

Goodbye boiling 30 degrees, hello unheated 16 degrees.

Goodbye brain freezing cold drinks, hello mouth boiling hot chocolates.

Goodbye shorts and flip flops, hello puffed up jackets and snug bodywear.

Goodbye endless summer vacations, hello boring inside board games.

Goodbye cold refreshing ice blocks, hello warm pancakes.

Goodbye tiring bmxing, hello indoor bmx foam pits.

Goodbye loveable summer holidays, hello stacks of school work.

Goodbye dripping sweat hello dotty goose bumps.

Goodbye summer hello autumn.

 day of a turtle

When I wake up im exited every day to go exploring I start to swim to the hot sand.As I swim there I relize that im so slow I wish I could move faster!!!.Finally when I got there I glazed around and saw my bro dino the turtle eating leaves I walked over to him and said hi can I have some.He said yes.We munched on the leaves for 5 minutes until we saw a big guy with a spaz 12 shotgun.Me and dino were so scared so we dug down until we wer safe.Then we climed up our hole and left the beach we then explored the forest.We started to starve so we called our friend tweety and then she dyrected us to a pond!.It was so cool!!! we ate dinner at the pond an ate some more leaves then it was sleep time.