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Friday 24 November 2017

Alarm call

For this week we wrote about a picture of a green goblin thing and a cute white cat. First the teachers gathered us together to brainstorm some good describing words for the goblin and the cat. Then we wrote a hook for our story and we also write a paragraph. and lastly we wrote the other paragraph. here is my writing

1 comment:

  1. Well done Josiah, you're starting to sound like Rick Riordan must be all his books you've read. Keep up the good work

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