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Saturday 16 April 2016

Star Explosion Writing

STAR EXPLOSION


For the last few weeks we have been doing learning how to write paragraphs in our writing and making them more descriptive.

Star Explosion

When a star is going to explode it means it's the end of the star's life. Then it begins its process of the explosion. It happens in four parts.

At first it doesn't look like a explosion but inside is a boiling fuse ready to explode. It swaps color between yellow,orange and red that means that it’s ready to explode. I think that it does this so that more stars can fit in and shine bright. This makes me wonder. what aliens think they are?

Then  the red starts to fade away and then the orange gets darker. then the flame starts to bubble outside of the circle. that means that inside the star it is expanding and trying to push out. And then all of a sudden yellow blobs of fire emerge from the star. This makes me wonder,What does a star explosion look like from earth?

The yellow spots turn into a blue flame. Wow!!! a big flash just like a camera.This  means it's blowing up. When the flash goes away the star is now and blue that is the hottest flame. this makes me wonder how long do stars live?

Now the star is blue that means it is very hot!. and then all of a sudden the blue star starts to expand and get bigger. it has 3 colors they are,a dark blue,a neon blue and a whitish color. The star is as bright as the night sky. This makes me wonder how hot is it?.





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