That was summer poem

A couple of mounths ago in writing we wrote a summer poem that had lots of wow words, adjectives and similes in it. the process of this work was we brainstormed some wow words to help us when we wrote our story. then we started to write and once we finished we had to go back over the poem and put in more details.

Antarctica descripton

For literacy we have been learning about Antarctica. We were told to write about Antarctica so we had to find facts about Antarctica. We started learning about Antarctica when we went on a trip to the Antarctic center to learn about explorers the weather and the animals that live in Antarctica. Then we were asked to choose a topic between Animals, explorers and weather and climate. Once we had chosen our topic we were told to write a story about Antarctica before we start on our topic. Here is my writing

introduction	1of 7 contenents, desert
characteristics	Cold 25% bigger than europe 2x the size of  australia, covered by snow has land underneath, has 90% of worlds snow . 2500 meters (2.5 km) deep snow. hard to live. coldest place on earth. Surrounded by water. The south pole can be found there. Doubles the size because of sea ice White desert
evaluation	I think that antarctica is a place that you should visit some day

                                      Antarctica

Crisp,white and unwelcoming. Antarctica is considered a desert because it has no rain. It is also 1 of the 7 continents in the world.

Antarctica is 2 times the size of Australia and 25% bigger than Europe. It has some amazing landscape that will blow you away for example massive glaciers and crazy ice platforms that overhang the a white cloudland. Antarctica has an active volcano named Mount erebus, mount erebus first Formed in 1908 and the last eruption was in 2011. Mount erebus also had a plane crash in 1979. A DC-10 with 257 people on board crashed at mount erebus and killed all people on board. Antarctica has 90% of world snow which if you think about is really fascinating because that means that the rest of the world only has 10 percent of the world's fresh water. Antarctica also has 70% of the world's fresh water so If you melted the whole of antarctica the world would have more fre

Antarctica emperor penguin writing

this week we have been writing about Antarctic animals. we first started learning about Antarctica when we went to the antarctic center to learn about the history and what happened at Antarctica. we went around most of the place looking at facts about animals, explorers and the weather. my favorite part was the snow room.

introduction	Emperor penguin
Characteristics	Biggest penguin, weights 30kg/66lbs height-115cm/3.8ft, breeding season April, December, Emperors breed in the depths of winter, 595,000 Emperors in world, eats Fish krill and squid predators leopard seals and killer whales, Emperors can age to 20yrs old, Big white, yellow
evaluation	I think that the emperor penguin is cute because of it's size. It makes it look so soft and cuddly

Emperor penguin

Emperors penguins live in Antarctica. they are a bird.

Emperors can grow up to 20 years old which is really crazy. Emperors have white belly's with a little bit of yellow/orange fur on the top with black all around. Emperors weigh 30kg/66lbs. they are 115cm tall/3.8ft that makes the Emperor the tallest penguin alive.

Emperors breed in the middle of winter. they must keep their babies warm other wise they will die. they would be too cold to survive and to young because they would not know any survival skills.

Emperors eat fish, krill and squid. The baby penguins feed on krill and squid. The population of Emperors are roughly around 595,000 emperors in the world.

Personally Emperor penguins are my favorite because they are unique and cool because of their height and their size compared to a human.

yellow crazy life cycle

For the last couple of days we have been learning about yellow crazy ants. we had to make a life cycle of the Yellow crays and  This is mine

School hiding spot

For the last week we have been writing about SHS hiding spots. In this task we had to plan of what our hiding looked like and then we took a photo of what our hiding spots looked like this is my writing. In the photo I am behind the container door

One fine day at school with kids playing ball tag and all of that and then all of a sudden a mysterious plane came out of nowhere With a big T on it, Cobi and I were confused but then we saw Lots of mexicans fell out of the plane and then we saw a orange figure hanging out of the plane. Cobi heard the orange figure say “haha mexicans I have put sleeping pills in your food NOW YOU ARE OUT OF AMERICA” and then he said Make america great again!. Me and Cobi were Confused but when I looked at the pile of mexicans they all had GUNS so me and Cobi ran to A place that I Know of by the middles syndicate. Once we were there I climbed onto the container door.

I was standing on the hinges when a portal appeared on the door, So I jumped in and Cobi followed. Now we were somewhere completely different to where we were Because we were in cuba and there were these two cars racing one was black and one was matte grey and the grey car had most of it's car parts missing. then we were teleported to somewhere else but this time Cobi was stuck in Cuba so I was alone in this military base with all of these weird things like grenade shape things, so i took them all and then I teleported back to the hiding spot. I ran to the field with all the angry mexicans and threw the device It blew up and a group of mexicans but then they magically disappeared into

selling a stick

for the last week we have been working on trying to persuade someone to buy the stick.

Introduction Hook / questions Have you been looking for that ultimate prank object?do you just want that perfect friend?do you want that extra pop of uniqueness in your home/workspace? Well seek no more because I present you…   A    stick Introduce your stick  This is no ordinary stick this is a SUPER stick with 99% natural wood and 1% brain power It has feelings too. It know when it s about to snap because It will make crackling
	Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point Paragraph 1 Real wood	This is not plastic 100% straight off a tree
Main Point Paragraph 2 It will stick with you	Will never leave you no matter what It will not to leaf you behind because it dont have any  legs
Main Point Paragraph 3 Help you	It could be a walking stick Or maybe the stick could be used for blind people
Conclusion So,consider buying this one of a kind stick because it could be the ultimate prank for christmas, it will stick with you and sometimes they can be very useful Reasons Elaboration Persuasive vocab

      A Fantas-stick friend

Have you been looking for that ultimate prank object? do you just want that perfect friend? do you want that extra pop of uniqueness in your home/workspace? Well seek no more because I present you…   A stick. This is no ordinary stick this is a SUPER stick with 99% natural wood and 1% brain power, it has feelings too. It lets you know when it needs water or food. It know when it´s about to snap because It will make a crackling sound. Those are only just some of the reasons.

Firstly, THIS IS NOT PLASTIC that's right it's totally wood and do you want to know how we make these sticks? Thats right we take old  branches  and we sand them down to the right size to sell to one LUCKY person. And do you want to know something else interesting? Well… these sticks are completely from trees. We don't make fakes we get them completely from trees like palm trees, fallen trees, unique trees and the list just goes on!

Secondly, It won't leave you behind. And what I mean by that is it will never leave you behind because it's not made to leaf you behind as they are especially built to stick with you. Also It just won't leaf you behind because it doesn't have LEGS because it doesn't come with body parts (body parts optional and could be purchased separately).

Lastly, it can help you in all ways for example it could be a walking stick for long bush walks or hiking. Or, it could be used for blind people that can't see, they can poke stuff  to see where they are going. It can be used as many other things but if I said all of it then it would take forever

In conclusion I believe that this unique, one of a kind stick is perfect for you, a friend or a family member so, what are you waiting for!? Get down to your local stick or nature store to get your special stick for all the right reasons!

persuasive writing

we have been working on persuasive writing for the last two weeks step by step we learnt about it and then in the second week we started writing it and this is the final product

Collaborative Success Criteria

• The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
• Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
• The reasons why with supporting ideas

A purr-fect friend for Ms McLeod

No pun intended

Did you know that a cat has a smooth,soothing purr,so I think ms Mcleod should buy a cat because they are cute and cuddly,cheaper than a dog and if you own a cat you have a 40% less chance of dying of a heart attack

Firstly, I think ms Mcleod should buy a cat because they are soft and furry. Also they comfort you by rubbing their head on your leg. Also It can help you relax and sleep but the best thing is got to be their faces because they are so cute especially If their face looks angry It makes them look so cute.

Another reason is that a cat is more cheaper than a dog and what I mean by that is a cat needs less attention because it doesn't need lots of toys because a dog likes attention,For example when you leave your house a dog will start howling and barking but a cat will just be like eh whatever and wander around the house all day.

Finally I think ms Mcleod should get a cat because for some weird reason if you have never owned a cat before you have a 40% more chance of dying of a heart attack now… It may sound peculiar but a cat can ease the pain when you have a heart attack,also scientist have talked about the myth and is believed to be REAL.

In conclusion I think Miss Mcleod should get a cat, because the are amazing cuddly animals that need less attention and can lower the chance of dying of a heart attack. So stop what you are doing! And hit up your local pet store to get you Purr-fect purring friend so please consider buying one of these furry animals for only a few dollars.

Olympic activity day 2

Star Explosion Writing

STAR EXPLOSION


For the last few weeks we have been doing learning how to write paragraphs in our writing and making them more descriptive.

Star Explosion

When a star is going to explode it means it's the end of the star's life. Then it begins its process of the explosion. It happens in four parts.

At first it doesn't look like a explosion but inside is a boiling fuse ready to explode. It swaps color between yellow,orange and red that means that it’s ready to explode. I think that it does this so that more stars can fit in and shine bright. This makes me wonder. what aliens think they are?

Then  the red starts to fade away and then the orange gets darker. then the flame starts to bubble outside of the circle. that means that inside the star it is expanding and trying to push out. And then all of a sudden yellow blobs of fire emerge from the star. This makes me wonder,What does a star explosion look like from earth?

The yellow spots turn into a blue flame. Wow!!! a big flash just like a camera.This  means it's blowing up. When the flash goes away the star is now and blue that is the hottest flame. this makes me wonder how long do stars live?

Now the star is blue that means it is very hot!. and then all of a sudden the blue star starts to expand and get bigger. it has 3 colors they are,a dark blue,a neon blue and a whitish color. The star is as bright as the night sky. This makes me wonder how hot is it?.