today we improved a blog comment. so we chose a comment that wasn't effective and made it a better comment. this is the comment I chose and made effective
Hi my name is Jerry from waikowhai primary school.I like this post because it is called being cybersmart. When I saw this post it reminded me about when my class did a this with our cybersmart teacher.Maybe next time you could add more detail about your post?if you want to see my blog type in http//.wps.jerryr.blogspot.com
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Hi my name is Jerry from waikowhai primary school.I like this post because it is called being cybersmart. When I saw this post it reminded me about when my class did a this with our cybersmart teacher.Maybe next time you could add more detail about your post?if you want to see my blog type in http//.wps.jerryr.blogspot.com
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