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Friday 18 November 2016

selling a stick

for the last week we have been working on trying to persuade someone to buy the stick.


Introduction Hook / questions
Have you been looking for that ultimate prank object?do you just want that perfect friend?do you want that extra pop of uniqueness in your home/workspace? Well seek no more because I present you…   A    stick


Introduce your stick  This is no ordinary stick this is a SUPER stick with 99% natural wood and 1% brain power It has feelings too. It know when it s about to snap because It will make crackling




Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point
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Real wood

  • This is not plastic




  • 100% straight off a tree
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It will stick with you
  • Will never leave you no matter what




  • It will not to leaf you behind because it dont have any  legs
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Help you
  • It could be a walking stick



  • Or maybe the stick could be used for blind people
Conclusion
So,consider buying this one of a kind stick because it could be the ultimate prank for christmas, it will stick with you and sometimes they can be very useful

Reasons
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      A Fantas-stick friend

Have you been looking for that ultimate prank object? do you just want that perfect friend? do you want that extra pop of uniqueness in your home/workspace? Well seek no more because I present you…   A stick. This is no ordinary stick this is a SUPER stick with 99% natural wood and 1% brain power, it has feelings too. It lets you know when it needs water or food. It know when it´s about to snap because It will make a crackling sound. Those are only just some of the reasons.

Firstly, THIS IS NOT PLASTIC that's right it's totally wood and do you want to know how we make these sticks? Thats right we take old  branches  and we sand them down to the right size to sell to one LUCKY person. And do you want to know something else interesting? Well… these sticks are completely from trees. We don't make fakes we get them completely from trees like palm trees, fallen trees, unique trees and the list just goes on!

Secondly, It won't leave you behind. And what I mean by that is it will never leave you behind because it's not made to leaf you behind as they are especially built to stick with you. Also It just won't leaf you behind because it doesn't have LEGS because it doesn't come with body parts (body parts optional and could be purchased separately).

Lastly, it can help you in all ways for example it could be a walking stick for long bush walks or hiking. Or, it could be used for blind people that can't see, they can poke stuff  to see where they are going. It can be used as many other things but if I said all of it then it would take forever

In conclusion I believe that this unique, one of a kind stick is perfect for you, a friend or a family member so, what are you waiting for!? Get down to your local stick or nature store to get your special stick for all the right reasons!




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