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Wednesday 18 October 2017

Te Manu Tukutuku poem

Today we wrote a feelings/senses poem about our new school. It had to be four sentences long and involved feel, hear, see smell, touch and overall feelings. First we started by brainstorming all of the feeling words as a group. Then we were set off to start our poem. Here is what I wrote.

17/10/17 Tuesday

Te Manu Tukutuku poem
Hear, see, smell, touch

I feel speechless at how big the new school is.
I hear the sound of children getting excited over the new school.
I see new and updated furniture as I walk in.
I smell that new building smell.
I touch the soft carpet like walls as if they were sheep.

Overall I am overwhelmed at how the new school is so different.

1 comment:

  1. Nice poem Josiah, so you feel speechless over the new school? It certainly is very flash with lots of really cool features. Does the new school make you excited to go to school?

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