persuasive writing

we have been working on persuasive writing for the last two weeks step by step we learnt about it and then in the second week we started writing it and this is the final product

Collaborative Success Criteria

• The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
• Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
• The reasons why with supporting ideas

A purr-fect friend for Ms McLeod

No pun intended

Did you know that a cat has a smooth,soothing purr,so I think ms Mcleod should buy a cat because they are cute and cuddly,cheaper than a dog and if you own a cat you have a 40% less chance of dying of a heart attack

Firstly, I think ms Mcleod should buy a cat because they are soft and furry. Also they comfort you by rubbing their head on your leg. Also It can help you relax and sleep but the best thing is got to be their faces because they are so cute especially If their face looks angry It makes them look so cute.

Another reason is that a cat is more cheaper than a dog and what I mean by that is a cat needs less attention because it doesn't need lots of toys because a dog likes attention,For example when you leave your house a dog will start howling and barking but a cat will just be like eh whatever and wander around the house all day.

Finally I think ms Mcleod should get a cat because for some weird reason if you have never owned a cat before you have a 40% more chance of dying of a heart attack now… It may sound peculiar but a cat can ease the pain when you have a heart attack,also scientist have talked about the myth and is believed to be REAL.

In conclusion I think Miss Mcleod should get a cat, because the are amazing cuddly animals that need less attention and can lower the chance of dying of a heart attack. So stop what you are doing! And hit up your local pet store to get you Purr-fect purring friend so please consider buying one of these furry animals for only a few dollars.

persuasive adopting from the pound

Today this week we are doing persuasive writing and this is the activity we did

I wonder about

this term we are learning about science. we got put our home rooms for science, so I was in Mrs raisins group and Mrs raisin was doing land forms and earth plates. We learnt about land changes,plates,earthquakes and more. Then we got told to come up with something that we wondered and i chose to do       how often do the tectonic plates collide

Calendar Art 2016

For the last two days we have been doing calendar art. We had to choose from 5 different art styles.  I chose to do art with Mrs McGuinniety. First we got a buddy and took a photo with a paint brush so it looks like we are painting the sky. So first we used coloured pencils to do our prototype and I did a UFO beaming up a gem and I liked it so I went to paint but I couldn't do the gem because I didn't have enough room to put it in.

Improving comments 2

today we improved a blog comments. so we chose a comment that wasn't effective and made it a better comment. this is the comment I chose and made effective

improving blog comments

today we improved a blog comment. so we chose a comment that wasn't effective and made it a better comment. this is the comment I chose and made effective

graph prefixes and suffixes

in phonics we are learning about prefixes and suffixes. most words in our language come from latin or greek origin. the word graph means write. we had to make a display showing what the words mean.