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Wednesday 10 August 2016

activity 3 day 3

     Poem about going to olympics

If I was at the Olympics i would be reporting about the things they do and how they get ready and train, I would love to look at all different types of sports. I could and i would describe what they are doing it would be the best Report Ever.

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  1. You have made a good attempt at this Josiah.

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  2. You made a good attempt but there are some things to fix up and i really liked If I was at the Olympics i would be reporting about the things they do and how they get ready and train. You should check out my blog. It reminds me of when i made a poem

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